While In Kenya
The girl's hairfalls soft, breezylike the palms soaked in evening light.Air brewed with fragrant heatbecomes lush tea, tinged with cloudssplintering into cinnamon.Its mood makes her drowsy,along with...
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"Air brewed with fragrant heatbecomes lush tea, tinged with cloudssplintering into cinnamon."Wendy,Unique and embracing, so very sensuous.All the senses involved in this potpourri.The symphony of...
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Ohhhh, Wendy! What a visual oddessy this is! I love this. I felt transported to this world! Excellent!Jared
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"Silence translucentas the powder on her face,blends with the soft, sifted goldof sundown"Your poems always take me on a journey, and I look forward to reading them. This one is full of stunning viual...
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Dear Sarah, Liz, Jared and PaulThank you all so much for reading and commenting on this poem. This one is an old one that has been revised about 5 times in the past 15 years but one that remains a...
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I enjoyed the story of this womanand the images of air brewed with fragrant heat,the mood that makes the charachter drowsyalong with those elephantsshe has come to photograph. I love these lines:...
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Wendy,Absolutely beautiful!!Every line, indeed each word, is used with such clarity and great effect.At first was thinking of Dian Fossey RE: Gorillas in the Mist, but turned for me with--"Yet within...
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Dear Zeke, Kerri and WillowI am really touched by your comments, gracious words and inisghts regarding this poem. Thank you all so much for your kindness and thoughtful consideration. That means alot...
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